impressive of my work I have been doing in the school grounds
Also I will help people get food spend all my money on them because I
want to be someone that could change the world so no one needs to
pay the bills for a house would you like it if you needed to pay over
$4000 thousand dollars- that's not right if you needed to pay for
your car for $1000 dollars that's not right.
We need to change this world so no one fights over
houses chucks rubbish around we need people to make a change help
the poor don't walk away like they are just some
piece of clay help make a change to this world we need to
make this world a better place any place bigger than an other
we need to change because we are New Zealand. Make a change.
Hey Valiant,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer learning project team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
I found this post really interesting and inspiring to read. I liked how your showed how we should make a change for the poor. The last bit sounds like it was turning into a poem which started to sound really good. It’s not one I could find so I assume it an original Valiant. You could see if you could carry on writing and if something like a song or rap could come out of it.
It’s awesome to see how this came out of a task to talk about if you were in charge of a school as the principle. Remember for next week you need to make sure to follow the task carefully to get the points.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel